You need to add more sub titles and explain what's being said. Your work is a work of passion, but you have to remember your trying to communicate with others. We don't know who all the pictures are of or for...that is you passion, the people don't understand why its important.
I can see you are emotional....but Glen Beck? A shrill?
You may understand what your proporting...but you need to remove the emotion from your work and explain a bit more to the masses. You may understand, I think you have an idea...but your not doing a good job at moving your passion to the people you are trying to reach.
You seem to be aware...but its your job to explain your awareness to the others.
As a film maker myself, you need to expand a bit more.
As a poster in many forums over the years...I do much the same as you and just puke.
You have to understand that many the people watching will not understand your concern.... you picked a good speaker and then a bad...but you didn't even tell the people what they were seeing.
If you are to make films, you must do it for the sheep.
I understand your passion and want...but there is a better way of doing it. Remember we live in the world.
but please don't give up...if you are truthful...that light will shine....give it time.
I will be watching you....and if I find you something different...I will expand...if I find you something else I will help you much more.