I'm writing a book and would like someone to proof read

[johnnywhiplash]

The novel I'm writing has just started today, labor day. It's called Among the living. It's a novel about a young man in the Army R&D who assists in programming and releasing on unsuspecting civilians of a fictional Wisconsin location an autonomous drone called Ranger. The book is only in the chapter one phase but I'd like to know if you InfoWars readers think it's something you'd honestly sit down and read......

Thank you very much in advance

Johnnywhiplash

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fHJQqsJmXwqkbdal568HpEJU16yqlDJ7JrumzrANzIU/edit

[Freelancer]

I'll be more than happy to do the read and tell ya what I think ... HOWEVER, I have one question, why Wisconsin ? Are you from there ?

[Freelancer]

Reading your journal, I answered my questions.

All I can say is keep writing, you had my attention in the first paragraph and I wanted to read more.

I have a question before we continue, is this reading as scifi or an auto biography ?

If you are at FT Mc Coy I'm not far from you and if you'd like to meet a few of my friends ( Freedom Loving Patriots) I can arrange that.

[johnnywhiplash]

It's more of an autobiography of a soldiers ethical dilemma when releasing armed drones into the general population because he's ordered to and as far as the town, I actually thought of the north when I read a story on info wars about Black Hawk Training in a city up there and residents told the boilerplate "Don't worry, all is normal..." kind of hogwash, and I'm in San Antonio, Texas.

Thank You very much for your feedback, it's so very important because as the motto in show business is "Give the people what they want..." I want to give readers that action packed novel that makes you stop and think and then tie it so easily into what's going on in the world today.

[Freelancer]

It's more of an autobiography of a soldiers ethical dilemma when releasing armed drones into the general population because he's ordered to and as far as the town, I actually thought of the north when I read a story on info wars about Black Hawk Training in a city up there and residents told the boilerplate "Don't worry, all is normal..." kind of hogwash, and I'm in San Antonio, Texas.

Thank You very much for your feedback, it's so very important because as the motto in show business is "Give the people what they want..." I want to give readers that action packed novel that makes you stop and think and then tie it so easily into what's going on in the world today.

I hear ya, back in 08 I saw "Shooter" for the first time, I was blown away, radical as hell and to be honest, Bob Lee Swagger had the perfect solution and I hate to say it cause I know its going to start a flame fest.

When your a public servant here in the states and you f**k the people, then have the nerve to be as blatant and basically tell the populous "FU" for your treason.   

There's only one solution and Bob Lee Swagger showed you at the end.